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Kak Rin ini puisinya Rupi Kaur. Tapi aku coba artiin jadi jelek 😅

aslinya aja deh ya. semoga gak bikin trit ini berantakan 🙏🏼

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Makasih sistakuh @Lady Whistledown .. 😍 Cakepz... Aku pernah ngerasa ky gitu.. 🙈

Nerjemahin puisi memang susah. Kita ga akan bs 100% setia pada teksnya, biasa ada unsur saduran juga. Seperti beberapa puisi Chairil, tapi karena dia jenius malah jadi lebih bagus dari aslinya. 😝😝

Cek pm ya.
 
malam paskah

tutuplah mata ketika sedang bercinta
kau tak perlu tahu
siapa mengantarkan kau pada tuhanmu
kau mendengus resah
sambil mendekapku gelisah

kau terlalu ragu menanggalkanku
tangis tanpa suara
membuat kau terus menunda
pejamkan matamu, sayang...

apa yang dapat membuatmu lega?
kau ingin aku datang pada jagaljagal itu?
ya aku akan melakukannya untukmu
lepaskan tanganmu, sayang...

bersama beberapa botol anggur
kau jadikan aku hidangan
sebuah perjamuan malam kudus
tamutamu berkepala pelanduk
taringtaring saudaramu
melahapku dengan riang

sayup suara litanilitani panjang
kau masuk ke ruang baca
mengunci pintu rapat-rapat
gemetar...
jangan menangis, sayang

tutuplah mata ketika sedang bercinta
kau tak perlu tahu
siapa mengantarkanku pada tuhanmu
kau mendengus resah
sambil membaca salam maria
dalam gelisah

Selatan Jakarta-WSJ​
 
Terakhir diubah:
Misi numpang ngecopas disini ya mpo'.. Kali ini bukan puisi, juga bukan bikinan dewe, tapi mnrt ane sdh seperti puisi, plus satu dimensi tambahan yaitu nada (apalagi ini memang salah satu band badass kaporit ane hehe).. Selamat dinikmati sekiranya pas 🙏

Every breaking wave - U2

Every breaking wave on the shore
Tells the next one there'll be one more
And every gambler knows that to lose
Is what you're really there for
Summer I was fearlessness
Now I speak into an answer phone
Like every fallen leaf on the breeze
Winter wouldn't leave it alone, alone
If you go
If you go your way and I go mine
Are we so
Are we so helpless against the tide?
Baby, every dog on the street
Knows that we're in love with defeat
Are we ready to be swept off our feet
And stop chasing every breaking wave
Every sailor knows that the sea
Is a friend made enemy
And every shipwrecked soul knows what it is
To live without intimacy
I thought I heard the captain's voice
But it's hard to listen while you preach
Like every broken wave on the shore
This is as far as I could reach
If you go
If you go your way and I go mine
Are we so
Are we so helpless against the tide?
Baby, every dog on the street
Knows that we're in love with defeat
Are we ready to be swept off our feet
And stop chasing every breaking wave
The sea knows where are the rocks
And drowning is no sin
You know where my heart is
The same place that yours has been
We know that we fear to win
And so we end before we begin
Before we begin
If you go
If you go your way and I go mine
Are we so
Are we so helpless against the tide?
Baby, every dog on the street
Knows that we're in love with defeat
Are we ready to be swept off our feet
And stop chasing every breaking wave
 
RinChan said:
@diemax13 Husss... Jgn malu2in di sini ah.. 🙈Kelakuan.. Makanya ke trit sebelah aja. Ga sah malu2 tp ngarep. hahaha
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Jih, lebih baik apa adanya kan ketimbang ada apanya :cool:

Di sebelah lagi aja gimana, kalau di sini tidak terpuaskan :malu:/

Brb sebelum ditagih setoran mesum ~:ngacir:










:Paws:
 
Karawangbekasi said:
Misi numpang ngecopas disini ya mpo'.. Kali ini bukan puisi, juga bukan bikinan dewe, tapi mnrt ane sdh seperti puisi, plus satu dimensi tambahan yaitu nada (apalagi ini memang salah satu band badass kaporit ane hehe).. Selamat dinikmati sekiranya pas 🙏

Every breaking wave - U2

Every breaking wave on the shore
Tells the next one there'll be one more
And every gambler knows that to lose
Is what you're really there for
Summer I was fearlessness
Now I speak into an answer phone
Like every fallen leaf on the breeze
Winter wouldn't leave it alone, alone
If you go
If you go your way and I go mine
Are we so
Are we so helpless against the tide?
Baby, every dog on the street
Knows that we're in love with defeat
Are we ready to be swept off our feet
And stop chasing every breaking wave
Every sailor knows that the sea
Is a friend made enemy
And every shipwrecked soul knows what it is
To live without intimacy
I thought I heard the captain's voice
But it's hard to listen while you preach
Like every broken wave on the shore
This is as far as I could reach
If you go
If you go your way and I go mine
Are we so
Are we so helpless against the tide?
Baby, every dog on the street
Knows that we're in love with defeat
Are we ready to be swept off our feet
And stop chasing every breaking wave
The sea knows where are the rocks
And drowning is no sin
You know where my heart is
The same place that yours has been
We know that we fear to win
And so we end before we begin
Before we begin
If you go
If you go your way and I go mine
Are we so
Are we so helpless against the tide?
Baby, every dog on the street
Knows that we're in love with defeat
Are we ready to be swept off our feet
And stop chasing every breaking wave
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Aku fine kok bang, tapi takutnya dianggap ga pas ma momod, ntar abang kena warning. 🙈 Kl bisa puisi aja ya, abangkuh. 😁
 
Enak ya bikin trit puisi... Mau gombal, jungkir balik, mesum... Apa aja bisa... 😍 Aku bahagia 🤭

#hormonyangbicara
 
Kanak-kanak ceria

Bau usai hujan itu
Memecah anganku terhambur
Bangkit berkepakan menuju satu pekarangan luas
Dimana tanah kering kulukis
Dengan jari kecilku
Lalu menjadi jari-jari kami yang ceroboh
Dan lengking dan serak tawa kami
Sesekali menyedot ingus
Yang tunduk pada hukum gravitasi
Kutanya padanya
"Siapa yang kawin nanti sama Evi kalo gede? "
Lalu pasir mulai beterbangan
Bersama derai tawa dan sedot ingus
Dikelilingi tiang-tiang bisu beratap genteng kampung
Tapi anganku berkumpul kembali
Aku kembali tunduk pada waktu
Tak kenal perjalanan kembali
Hanya ada depan
Dan depan
Dan keniscayaan
Untuk berpulang

-seperempat malam diantara angin laut-
 
Singgahku hanya sesaat
Menjajah lidahmu
Menggigiti bibirmu
Merenggut rambutmu

Rebah
Gairah
Rekah

Oh...
Diam kau
Bungkam nafsumu
Cengkram entakanmu

Malam ini
Kau pemuasku

Doronganmu milikku
Peluhmu kuasaku
Geliatmu menjawabku

Sumbu waktu terbakar
Punggungku membusur
Lututku mengait erat
Memasuki gerbang indraloka

Berhenti kau

Basahi bibirku yg timpas
Kecup keningku dg dekap
Rangkum aku di antara napasmu

Singgahku malam ini
Milikku...


Permisiii numpang nyoret lagi kak @RinChan 😘
Ps: maklum, maljum 🙈🤣
 
Enggak papa.. Maap aku agak slowres... Bolak balik trit sana sini.. 🙈

Aku yang makasih sama bang @Karawangbekasi , sis @Lady Whistledown mau meramaikan trit puisiku yang begini2 ajah... 😍 Puisi kalian ciamik. Sampai kadang bingung sendiri harus komen gimana yg proper. Terima kasih banget
:ampun: :ampun:
Kalau bisa ditambah lagi, terutama yg mesyum hihihi.
Eh iya.. Rin mau nagih setoran ke bang: @KanjengZepros hahaha
 
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